Oh my god, this is so brilliant. I love it, everything --- I love Walter here, a pitch perfect depiction of him; I love Jane, god you put him down so him, so effervescent, so vivacious, so lovable, omg <3
Also Lisbon is perfect. And the different exchanges between everyone -- especially the sense that Walter and Jane are having their own interesting exchange that Lisbon isn't totally privy too. Also, my favorite, most perfect detail is the honey on Jane's cup, him sucking it off his fingers, and Walter taking his cup at the end. Total brilliance, I love it.
OMG HUGE FAN HERE <3<3<3 I so hope you've written more about these three, because I'm going to check right now. And this fic is so amazing, damn I wish I'd written it ahhhhh <3<3<3
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Date: 2011-03-16 05:33 am (UTC)Also Lisbon is perfect. And the different exchanges between everyone -- especially the sense that Walter and Jane are having their own interesting exchange that Lisbon isn't totally privy too. Also, my favorite, most perfect detail is the honey on Jane's cup, him sucking it off his fingers, and Walter taking his cup at the end. Total brilliance, I love it.
OMG HUGE FAN HERE <3<3<3
I so hope you've written more about these three, because I'm going to check right now. And this fic is so amazing, damn I wish I'd written it ahhhhh <3<3<3
: )!!