I totally dig the smart and loyal Hendricks theme when it crops up in fics, and I'm pretty sure I'd struggle to see him any other way now.
Harry's Issues definitely deserve their capital I.
I think you've actually articulated what was going on between Thomas and Harry there better than I managed it to myself when I was feeling my way through the interaction, because that's spot on. I'm thinking Harry *will* probably have a minor freak out later, because whilst he doesn't think gay=icky I think he has a lot of Macho Guy ideas that are going to collide with some of those sterotypes he's internalised. But a large part of that's likely to be "how did I not know this about myself *already*?"
And very happy you think I've got Marcone's voice right.
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Date: 2010-06-08 08:24 am (UTC)Harry's Issues definitely deserve their capital I.
I think you've actually articulated what was going on between Thomas and Harry there better than I managed it to myself when I was feeling my way through the interaction, because that's spot on. I'm thinking Harry *will* probably have a minor freak out later, because whilst he doesn't think gay=icky I think he has a lot of Macho Guy ideas that are going to collide with some of those sterotypes he's internalised. But a large part of that's likely to be "how did I not know this about myself *already*?"
And very happy you think I've got Marcone's voice right.
This is really useful feedback, thank you!