I realize that I should have commented on this ages ago, because i love it passionately. You've inspired me. A lot.
That way you have Jane so certain that he's fine now, when he's really not, is simply beautiful. And the team being his protectors (Lisbon, especially, I felt was well done) is really just incredibly touching.
The characterization is spot on, just so that you know :D
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Date: 2010-02-12 10:11 pm (UTC)That way you have Jane so certain that he's fine now, when he's really not, is simply beautiful. And the team being his protectors (Lisbon, especially, I felt was well done) is really just incredibly touching.
The characterization is spot on, just so that you know :D