Date: 2007-11-11 01:59 pm (UTC)
I love this story to tiny little bits! Bits like:

“Much! He’s like my brother... a brother that cooks and mends, and tries to keep you out of trouble... actually, Much is like my mother."


“No. Sir.” He decided to cling to the safety of monosyllabic answers.


“Are you coming Gisborne?” He snapped from the corridor, irritated that his exit was being spoiled by the fact that Hood and Gisborne were frozen in tableaux.


Usually everything was simple. Obey Vaisey. Chase Marian, and try to woo her. Chase Hood, and try to kill him. Frighten peasants.


What if this unpredictable social paralysis still occurred when he was married to the woman?


The outlaws melted away into the darkness, but not before Hood could whisper, “See you soon,” and wink at nobody in particular.


And I loved the gang bickering about the gold... Spot on.

I dont' know what to think of Marian... I suppose I just wish she would have this sudden urge to check out the latest medieval fashion trends in Paris, and take off for a year or so. I actually like her, but not in the part as romantic interest for either of the boys.

I did not expect boy kissing this soon or this smoothly, but hey, I'm not complaining!

You are a great storyteller and I will follow this story to whatever end. :)
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