This really is going swimmingly. I adore how you're accounted for the guardsmen. I also really liked, as furiously as Locksley usually shone, the darkness of the holy land had nearly swallowed him and the way Robin said, "It's always about the war." There was something else, something funny, but I've forgotten what it was. Still, thumbs up!
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Date: 2008-07-05 09:58 pm (UTC)