“Yes.” Guy said, with the inevitable feeling that this was somehow going to go horribly horribly wrong.
*snickers*
Poor Guy! For some reason I think he is plauged by that feeling a lot...
I'm exceedingly impressed with your dialouge, it flows wonderfully. Well done, you!
Interesting turn, with this Cecil de Courtell stumbling into the plot; whats up with this letter, and with the king, and with the Lion's Heart? Keeping us in suspense with evil cliffhangers, hm, okey then...
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Date: 2007-11-08 01:05 pm (UTC)*snickers*
Poor Guy! For some reason I think he is plauged by that feeling a lot...
I'm exceedingly impressed with your dialouge, it flows wonderfully. Well done, you!
Interesting turn, with this Cecil de Courtell stumbling into the plot; whats up with this letter, and with the king, and with the Lion's Heart? Keeping us in suspense with evil cliffhangers, hm, okey then...
More, pretty please?