http://sprl1199.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sprl1199.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] grenegome 2010-08-14 06:47 pm (UTC)

That was amazing! I love the thought of Jane's wife as a master manipulator. And that little touch of darkness (using the baby as a "prop") was perfect! Definitely someone I could see Jane marrying. :)

And then, of course, there's the fact that you took her out of the role of "nameless victim" and made her interesting. Well done! Until we learn otherwise, this is my personal Mrs. Jane canon.

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