Dear GOD but you can write a compelling kiss! Harry leaning Marcone back into the arm around his waist, a guiding hand on his jaw to tilt his head back, and he's good enough to force a tightening grip from mister cool, calm, and collected. (shivers pleasantly)
Not to mention, "but then he'd started doing rather clever things with his tongue, and I'd gotten distracted." ZOMG you are made of WIN!!
Yes, I'm fond of a confident, talented Harry who totally blows John out of the water. Can you tell? (grin)