Ooh, I liked this. I don't usually (read: pretty much ever) read non-con, but your take on the characters here was excellent - I especially liked the part where Jane pretends to be afraid of Bosco to get the case back, and then Rigsby and Cho wanting to teach him to fight. I think yours was the best Jane I've seen in fic so far :)

In all a very interesting fic and one that got me thinking about the characters, and I would love to see more Mentalist fic from you, either a continuation of this or something else :)