spikedluv: (misc: waiting_tazi)
it only hurts when i breathe ([personal profile] spikedluv) wrote in [personal profile] grenegome 2008-03-22 08:28 pm (UTC)

Wonderful story! As much as I love it when the guys get right to it, I loved this slow build up, showing the heat growing between them long before they did anything about it. And I loved your Guy in this, taking the initiative with the peasants, telling the Sheriff 'no', seeking Marian's approval, so complicated a character. And the ending was fabulous. *g*

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