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Ailette ([identity profile] ailette.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] grenegome 2007-11-06 10:14 am (UTC)

Oooooh, another Guy/Robin fic. <3

It hadn’t occurred to Guy that Locksley stealing a bath would necessitate nudity -
Now I'm picturing Guy taking a bath with white clothes on... Well done, you. XD

He had forgotten that Hood, with all his high principles, would fight dirty. - That's so right. And Guy, the one without morals, would never do that. Funny, that.

“He kicked me! He broke into my house, started taking a bath, and then he kicked me!” - lol. He just sounds too defensive. Noone would actually believe him. But, in my opinion, Robin should've been limping, not Gisborne. IF anything would have happened. ;)

“True. Very well, agreed, but I’m gagging him.”
“Be my guest.” - I guess Guy will do the same as soon as he gets the chance. ^^

Guy hinted and hinted that Marian invite him in to spend what little remained of the night, but after a few awkward moments at the stable door all he got was a horse he would need to return in the morning. - Awww, awkward Gisborne. He should just give up on Marian already. And unless she becomes a Guy/Robin fangirl, I still hate her. >.>

“Wakey wakey Gisborne! I hear you spent an exciting night.” - OMG. Your Sherrif is written perfectly. Now I actually wish he would wake me up like that every morning. But I really don't know how Guy could keep a straight face. I burst out laughing. ;)

I also really liked your Robin-Guy interaction. They play nicely in your fic. Soooo... when can we expect the next chapter? ;)

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