I just now finished reading. I really don't know how I feel about it. I actually took notes during my reading (several of which consist of "Hells yes, Mouse! Hells yes, Molly! Hells yes, staff!") so I'll type up my complete thoughts for myself and hopefully stumble upon a coherent sentence worth posting.

Couple of things though. This all happened in a day?! Feel free to draw out your story-telling a bit more, Butcher! Harry's thoughts on the difference between men and women's conversational styles and his judgment on gay men? SO SHOE-HORNED IN. OMG, Mollllllllly! Michael and Charity! Even Michael's going to need time to forgive Harry for involving his daughter with this result. *Two* women killed, *two* women forced into roles they don't want. ARGH.

So many references! An original Rescuers movie reference! Really? SANTA CLAUS! I don't know if I like Odin being Santa, but I so want Marcone and the coal jokes! The Hunt, Harry taking over the Hunt and they let him. So cool. Demonreach, badass, also cool. I hope you or someone else writes all your fic ideas.

And finally: "There's a storm coming." WHY A STORM??!! WHAT ELSE CAN POSSIBLY HAPPEN TO THESE PEOPLE?!